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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

i realy like the page but because you asked for cirituq i will try to give you some.

panel 1 the hand on the right site gets to much attention. i would add more hands or remove the one so that the focus gets more to the band.

panel 2 the hand with the phone looks somehow strange, maybe because of the shading on it.
the hands in the background with the shield looks somehow strange with the head of the guy in the middle oof it. i would move it just a bit to the left or right.

panel4 tha dark shadow silhouette gets again to much attention. iw would work without too.

about the rating stars...well, dont care about them <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>